I can resonate while reading the imprints of Sylvia Plath with new, unique themes of childhood trauma, toxic parenting, and mental health, etc. So, emtional and sensitive to feel it.
I don’t know. Perhaps the idea of the poem is taking over the poem so that the myopia is making it feel so very myopic! Since it’s also my opia, or ours, I’d like to offer a few different line breaks? horse / tranquilizer but didn't like the taste / of hay. Exercise keeps a mind distracted / … but I am in complete agreement on Thursdays.
I can resonate while reading the imprints of Sylvia Plath with new, unique themes of childhood trauma, toxic parenting, and mental health, etc. So, emtional and sensitive to feel it.
I don’t know. Perhaps the idea of the poem is taking over the poem so that the myopia is making it feel so very myopic! Since it’s also my opia, or ours, I’d like to offer a few different line breaks? horse / tranquilizer but didn't like the taste / of hay. Exercise keeps a mind distracted / … but I am in complete agreement on Thursdays.
"pedalled"?
The last couple of Hicock poems seem like a mix of "Deep Thoughts with Jack Handey" and an unedited stream of consciousness....
Peddled? Why?