The unnatural order of things
Time being infinite, all she needs is a fourth job to pay for everything else
The unnatural order of things
by Bob Hicok
The TV that had been left on was playing a commercial full of beaches, bikinis, and sun when she peeled off the condom someone had thrown at the screen. Her job cleaning rooms at the Sable Hotel pays for the car that takes her across town to wait tables at The Parthenon, which covers rent for the apartment where she lets out dresses and mends the knees of pants that have bent too often to the god of clean floors. Time being infinite, all she needs is a fourth job to pay for everything else. One of the women in the ad looked like she must have looked twenty years ago, if she was right when she touched her face in the mirror behind the TV that she was younger and beautiful once and didn't know what was coming. Then she cleaned the mirror of her face by walking away. The rest of her shift, she repeated the word vacation in her head and imagined the ocean touching her body softly and rhythmically, a liquid clock of a billion hands. When the word Tahiti came to mind, she said it out loud to the bed she was making, as if asking it to come away with her. The bed said no. Not no so much as nothing. Though it looked perfect when she was done, ready for sleep or sex or dreams, but only after she gave the bedspread a quick tug in the left corner and smoothed out the last wrinkle with her hand.





Oh, my. Oh, my. What touching and vivid images.
I know poor people that love to travel. Gets me every time, just crazy far as I can tell. Nothing I can't do right at home saving up my cash for a downturn that I couldn't do "traveling". Great work though, really draws you in and keeps you jumping from line to line.